Tuesday 8 January 2013

Louis Tomlinson Christmas Card


My Primark Power Points:

I should add a picture to make it more eye-catching.

The background is very distracting i should change it to something simpler.

I should put in some actual opinions from my friends.

The second two paragraphs are linked to each others pictures so i should swap the around.

Throughout the slide show all the different fonts are distracting.

The text is too small, i should make it bigger.

Improved Version: